Poem 2: The Jump

[Cordelia]

Hi Light,

thanks for sharing a poem
your poem brings me on a journey where i can see aspects of myself...
which means for me, that you are showing a truth about yourself in your writing.
though meaning for the writer and the meaning for the reader can be unique and this is ok.


your last line shocks  ... though i wonder if people would witness a "lump".... maybe more than that?

...it's good that you write.
............


...hoping to hear more of your poetry

with best wishes,
Cordelia