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Poem
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I like it, but if you meant for each of them to be statements, shouldn't you have used a period at the end of each sentence instead of using the comma on certain sentences?? Either way it works for me and I like it.... Thanks for sharing it Light.....

Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni
The Eleventh Doctor: Nobody important? Blimey, that's amazing. You know that in nine hundred years of time and space and I've never met anybody who wasn't important before.
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Poem - by Light - 02-16-2010, 10:47 PM
Re: Poem - by Cordelia - 02-17-2010, 12:38 PM
Re: Poem - by Light - 02-17-2010, 02:15 PM
Re: Poem - by Cordelia - 02-17-2010, 03:05 PM
Re: Poem - by JenniLynne - 02-17-2010, 05:32 PM

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