rory
06-05-2009, 02:50 PM
i was bored in math class so i wrote something deeply disturbing.
the third stanza is a little weak, mostly because the last line has too many syllables. i couldn't find something to rhyme with "well" and "hell"
don't worry, i'm not going to kill anyone
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I shot myself in the head,
My face is bloody red,
I feel real weak
And I look like a freak
But somehow I'm not dead!
This cut burns like a knife
Maybe I shouldn't have strangled my wife
And drowned her beau
Now I have to go
Or serve 25-to-life
Now I don't feel so well
Perhaps I'm headed for hell
But I'm not so brave
Hope I rot in the grave
And maggots will eat at my cells
the third stanza is a little weak, mostly because the last line has too many syllables. i couldn't find something to rhyme with "well" and "hell"
don't worry, i'm not going to kill anyone
---------------------------------------
I shot myself in the head,
My face is bloody red,
I feel real weak
And I look like a freak
But somehow I'm not dead!
This cut burns like a knife
Maybe I shouldn't have strangled my wife
And drowned her beau
Now I have to go
Or serve 25-to-life
Now I don't feel so well
Perhaps I'm headed for hell
But I'm not so brave
Hope I rot in the grave
And maggots will eat at my cells