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mimi.bo

An Agnostic at the Bus Stop

Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.

Meliadus

That's very good for something that short.  Thank you for sharing that with us all.
(05-01-2009, 01:12 PM)mimi.bo link Wrote: [ -> ]An Agnostic at the Bus Stop

Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.



That was very lovely..... Thank you so much for sharing your creativity......


Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni

mimi.bo

Thank you both.
Smile
Wow.  I really like your composition !

If you want to share any more of your works, I would certainly look forward to it.  Smile

Take care,

Ez

mimi.bo

Thanks, Ez! I might do just that.
Beautiful verse, wonderful imagery.  :APD:

mimi.bo

Thanks very much!  Smile

Cordelia

wonderful writing

:APD:

thanks for sharing,

best wishes,
Isabella