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seasons...
#1
languish a daisy
in mid-august sun
awaiting a morrow
when summer is done

withered and wilted
from autumn's cool breath
anticipating
the winter's sweet death

springtime arrives
the cycle begins
on fragile green wings
birth growth and the end.
"If I thought my answer were given to anyone who would ever return to the world, this flame would stand still without moving any further. But since never from this abyss has anyone ever returned alive, if what I hear is true, without fear of infamy I answer you.
- Dante "The Inferno"
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#2
I thought that was really pretty liz..... Thanks for sharing it.......

Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni
The Eleventh Doctor: Nobody important? Blimey, that's amazing. You know that in nine hundred years of time and space and I've never met anybody who wasn't important before.
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#3
...flows very well...

intersting take on the cycles of nature and life.

I hope my death is sweet and not sour!

thanks for sharing,
Cordelia
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#4
(12-10-2009, 12:38 AM)liz link Wrote:languish a daisy
in mid-august sun
awaiting a morrow
when summer is done

withered and wilted
from autumn's cool breath
anticipating
the winter's sweet death

springtime arrives
the cycle begins
on fragile green wings
birth growth and the end.

Very nice, Liz.  Smile

But on a critical note, the last paragraph doesn't scan as well as the first two...
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