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The Weight
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(09-02-2009, 01:57 AM)iocaine0351 link Wrote: With my dull knife
I etched
a notch in the cord.
Slowly, painfully
I carved away
the trust
exposing the hurt beneath.
The weight on the other end
proved to be too much,
straining
until finally,
with a groan,
the
cord
snapped.


I like this quite a bit iocane..... Thanks for sharing it with us.....

Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni
The Eleventh Doctor: Nobody important? Blimey, that's amazing. You know that in nine hundred years of time and space and I've never met anybody who wasn't important before.
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The Weight - by iocaine0351 - 09-02-2009, 01:57 AM
Re: The Weight - by JenniLynne - 09-02-2009, 12:32 PM

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