Stanzas

[Sadstguy]

1.
For ever he will think of you
As long as he draws breath
The one who let her dream come true
While he was courting death

Wow!  The power there is intense (these words hit me perfectly on a personal level, but I think they'd hold great power in any case).  Even before I realized those lines were really a volta, they struck me.

You are exceptionally good.