Just a thought

[Cordelia]

Thanks for sharing your poetry! rolling!
as with all poetry the reader has a unique interpretation from the poet.
I am struck by how vivid your poem is. at a thinking level, i wish to hear the french sounds as
a poem is to be read. Unfortunately that's quite tricky here unless you post a youtube link.
hearing the english translation, at a feeling level, i feel a sense of retrospect, a sense of life in refection.

I hope to hear more of your work,

Cordelia