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The Weight
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With my dull knife
I etched
a notch in the cord.
Slowly, painfully
I carved away
the trust
exposing the hurt beneath.
The weight on the other end
proved to be too much,
straining
until finally,
with a groan,
the
cord
snapped.
That is not dead which can eternal lie,<br />And with strange aeons even death may die.
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(09-02-2009, 01:57 AM)iocaine0351 link Wrote: With my dull knife
I etched
a notch in the cord.
Slowly, painfully
I carved away
the trust
exposing the hurt beneath.
The weight on the other end
proved to be too much,
straining
until finally,
with a groan,
the
cord
snapped.


I like this quite a bit iocane..... Thanks for sharing it with us.....

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