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A little something. - mimi.bo - 05-01-2009
An Agnostic at the Bus Stop
Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.
Re: A little something. - Meliadus - 05-01-2009
That's very good for something that short. Thank you for sharing that with us all.
Re: A little something. - JenniLynne - 05-01-2009
(05-01-2009, 01:12 PM)mimi.bo link Wrote: An Agnostic at the Bus Stop
Once again,
the sun has birthed a new reason to live:
I shimmy beneath the blonde threads of sky
to swallow the sample of Heaven's smile,
but still,
I don't believe.
That was very lovely..... Thank you so much for sharing your creativity......
Peace & :ht:,
Jenni
Re: A little something. - mimi.bo - 05-01-2009
Thank you both.
Re: A little something. - Ezrasleo - 05-01-2009
Wow. I really like your composition !
If you want to share any more of your works, I would certainly look forward to it.
Take care,
Ez
Re: A little something. - mimi.bo - 05-01-2009
Thanks, Ez! I might do just that.
Re: A little something. - adonais - 05-01-2009
Beautiful verse, wonderful imagery. :APD:
Re: A little something. - mimi.bo - 05-02-2009
Thanks very much!
Re: A little something. - Cordelia - 05-02-2009
wonderful writing
:APD:
thanks for sharing,
best wishes,
Isabella