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In the blackness that is
My war-torn spirit
There is a light
Burning in the pit.

A pinprick of daylight
In the silence of the tomb.
Tenuously flickering
Going out soon.

I'm fighting to hold on
To the better parts of me
But it's always a contest
Between myself and the sea.

Will I hold on
to all that I hold dear
Will my better angels prevail
Or will I give way to fear?

This question forever haunts me
In the light of day, and the dark of night.
And I wait here, flickering,
Until the day I lose the fight.

If I let go
Will there be anything left?
Or will I be empty,
A soul bereft?

:nddrg:
I like this iocane.... It's good, thanks for sharing it with us....

Peace & much  :ht:,
Jenni
Thank you for reading, Jenni!
(09-04-2009, 05:47 PM)iocaine0351 link Wrote: [ -> ]Thank you for reading, Jenni!


I read just about everything posted......  ;D


Peace &  :ht:,
Jenni

Cordelia

poignant, sad with some glimmer of hope?

that's my reading of your poem.

thanks for sharing,

Cordelia