02-14-2010, 03:01 PM
02-14-2010, 03:26 PM
It's beautiful..... Both versions..... The French language sounds so pretty...... Thanks for sharing......
Peace & :ht:,
Jenni
Peace & :ht:,
Jenni
Cordelia
02-15-2010, 04:15 PM
rolling,
you are so talented,
mon Dieu!
you write with such beauty, i find myself
drawing breath after each line.
wonderful :ht: :ht: :ht:
i hope you allow the gift of :APD:
you are so talented,
mon Dieu!
you write with such beauty, i find myself
drawing breath after each line.
wonderful :ht: :ht: :ht:
i hope you allow the gift of :APD:
Cordelia
02-16-2010, 04:20 PM
this person who you perceive as having more talent than you,
can you send me a link to his work?
.... because it's not often that art takes my breath away
a person once told me that comparison's are odius.
....I read Pablo Neruda .... once tried to write a poem like him and it was not good...but this is all part of a journey to find a voice
one can call one's own. I was reading his poetry and Elma Mitchells poetry today
and i felt envious. then I am aware of what I am missing.
Not only am i missing the beauty that is their poetry, but also
i deny myself for the future, a degree of freedom in my writing.
I am still trying to understand how to give voice to myself.
there is only one person who can write like you and
that's you. I think your poetry is amazing and as I recall I am not alone in this, not by any means
:ht: :ht: :ht:
can you send me a link to his work?
.... because it's not often that art takes my breath away
a person once told me that comparison's are odius.
....I read Pablo Neruda .... once tried to write a poem like him and it was not good...but this is all part of a journey to find a voice
one can call one's own. I was reading his poetry and Elma Mitchells poetry today
and i felt envious. then I am aware of what I am missing.
Not only am i missing the beauty that is their poetry, but also
i deny myself for the future, a degree of freedom in my writing.
I am still trying to understand how to give voice to myself.
there is only one person who can write like you and
that's you. I think your poetry is amazing and as I recall I am not alone in this, not by any means
:ht: :ht: :ht: